babbling about Astra's Demo

here's something I'm worried about; I'm worried about both routes being TOO different from each other. Artemis' route has a solid formula, one which I want to follow for Greenfyre's.

But maybe that way of thinking is restrictive?

I'm just babbling to myself here.

I'm really, really excited to show this to the world when it's ready. I'm trying to enjoy the process in the present, as well.

Maybe it's okay for Greenfyre's route to be more different in comparison to Artemis'? She likes to think outside of the box, after all, so maybe it's fitting!

so without spoiling, the formula I really like that I've implemented in Artemis' route that I want to emulate for Greenfyre's, is basically

"oh hey you're new, let's hang out" > hanging out event > "I'm gonna talk about myself" > dinner and discussing tomorrow > homewarming gift > sleep, then nightmare > "SURPRISE I'M FUCKED UP ON THE INSIDE" > some kind of fight scene?? one wrong move and you or your friend will literally die > important bonding moment > waking up > breakfast time and plans to spend the day together > activity > evening reflection and the good ending.

like, I'm really happy with Artemis' route, I'm really hoping others will like it too. I hope Greenfyre's route will be just as good.

I'm also hoping for the two routes to have an equal number of passages but...maybe it's okay for one route to have more passages than the other? I mean is anybody gonna care? I'd hate for reading this to be a drag, it really has my heart in it.