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Song im working on

(Possible names: Lonely Unease, Sweet Sixteen, Lapse  in Faith… if you think any of these sound better, tell me which name you think fits best!)


(verse one)


the seconds tick tock, for each movement i take my time,

wait out the clock, by now the pain is paradigm,

im just sifting, just drifting just trying to hide 

away, theres no where to go but down


Todays my day, whys it feel like every other?

Wide awake, im just working hard to smother

every feeling thats abrasive, so many places

i could be, yet instead i’m here right now


(chorus)


Sweet sixteen, please smile im fragile,

dont look closely or else youll unravel 

the signs that im not really doing alright,

just watch the horizon, the setting sunlight


Look at me, im not crying my darling,

we only pray that our sins stop hurting

No time to give up just continue the fight,

The days will keep coming, maybe we live on out of spite.


(verse two)


Keep looking forward, no time for reflection,

each building burden a jab at my protection,

My vision’s going double, I catch a whiff of trouble

but im okay, just stick to this road im bound,


A double take, im always given second chances,

Oh what to make of all these clockwork dances,

try to tell the right from wrong, simply play along,

out of the fray, the lonely unease ive found,


(chorus)


Sweet sixteen, please smile im fragile,

dont look closely or else youll unravel 

the signs that im not really doing alright,

just watch the horizon, the setting sunlight


Look at me, im not crying my darling,

we only pray that our sins stop hurting

No time to give up just continue the fight,

The days will keep coming, maybe we live on out of spite.





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I like this sm mate, I just listened to the vocals n you sound amazing good job mate


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thank you so much!’

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just uploaded myself singing the vocals! heres a link: https://sndup.net/rzkc/


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diogenes

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i had some ideas for a song, and i didnt have time to finish it. ill work on this when i have the chance, and then later ill record the vocals


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