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My Mind is Vomiting 5

   as the headlights of cars lights up the pitch-black earth

      as you listening to loud laughter like a concerto
         as you inhale the polluted air like fragrance 
            maybe you will understand me

               people always leaves as if they will catch something
                  you will understand me when you watch the infinity of Marmara
                     people always leaves as if they will catch something
                        but where
                           no one knows



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Angry chiwawa

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i enjoyed reading that to be honest


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Thank you.. ^-^

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William

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7 minutes ago

Love this write. And I like that you bring in an element of your region 'Marmara' (admittedly, I had to look it up, but I was happy to do so.) Really well done.


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Thank you so much :) I wanted to mention Marmara specifically because of its conflicts with pollution right now. I am really glad that you enjoyed..

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