Poem I wrote plz give feedback 👉👈

Warm flights 

Grass a glimmer 

Stars a shimmer 

Cool wind summer night 

Why didn't you stay sublime

Oh night oh thee oh fight oh we

Looking up high starstruck

Hue in the past 

Few last 

What i would do 

To be stuck with you

Pit pat the rain falls 

Room of color once instilled  

The knife sits still 

Harming nights

From once warm flights