One of my first poems

Not the best but it's the first one I've really wrote

Your voice is like nails on a bloody chalkboard. Your face makes me want to gag. Your control made me want to rebel. Your eyes reminded me of Big brother, always watching what I do. I hate you.

You are a thief, I wish our time was brief. I don't wish you the best nor the worst. I wish, to forget. Wipe my memory of you.