song lyrics so far

hi
my last post was about the planning, heres a semi-final version of the lyrics. its really got taylor swift, speak now kinda vibes to it it think, but i hope it'll sound more pop punk when i add electric guitar and drums. they're honestly not the most creative or original of lyrics, but they are from experience and i think the instrumentals are cool. i'll post tab for bass, guitar, and maybe some drum music/a loop or something idk in another entry xD. i'm still working on them, this is just so i can save them somewhere. i'd like to add more interesting workplay, these words are pretty boring. and learn some basic skills when it comes to percussion, idk.

verse one
i havent seen you in a while
i havent seen you in, forever
and you still might make me smile, but i dont think that we should get together
prechorus
If I could talk to you, what would I say
and if i could see you again, would it feel the same as back then
chorus
cause i kinda really knew you
and i kinda really liked you
and you kinda really knew me and you liked me too
but now it's done 
now it's gone 
now its time for me to move on 
and i'm trying, but i dont know how
verse two
its been a while since we broke up
its been a while since you broke up with me
in front of all my friends i tried to pretend I was fine
prechorus
if you could talk to me, what would you say
and if you could see me again, would it be the same as back then
chorus
cause i kinda really knew you
and I kinda really liked you
and you kinda really knew me and you liked me too
but now its done
now its gone
now its time for me to move on
bridge
but i remember you stories, when you told me you loved me and sneaking off to the starbucks while pretending to study. your dumbass doc martins, your cool graphic tees. your mom's silver necklace and how you moved on from me
third verse
i havent seen you in a while
i havent seen you in, forever
and you still might make me smile, but i dont think that we should get together


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ITS REALLY GOOD


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