praying to god-trees

I went to the nature sanctuary today

took the celestial trail
met perfect, old god-trees

I gave wordless noises to all the stones
hugged and smeared tears on them
I apologized
they emptied me out with efficient courtesy and made room for more

the man in the parking lot didn't like me
why did you bother coming here just to remain unchanged
the me inside me said that
the man said nothing at all


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Nicola Micanti

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/zgouspa1ulb0lpz/texas%20girl.mp3?dl=0
I just did this as a tribute to your poetry. The pronunciation is probably not really good, but that was the best I could do. Hope you enjoy it!


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woooow this is so cool, I am honored!!!! thank you so much! 😯🙌🏻💛

by ✿blush puppy; ; Report

So you liked it, I guess...

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yes I did!!! 😱

by ✿blush puppy; ; Report

Well, I just liked the piece of poetry. It sounded so painfully true to me. Good collaboration!

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you added some really powerful ambiance with the sombre music and the delivery of the lines! there's an element of spiritual soberness that I really like, all the seriousness of a bible verse. it really made me experience this poem differently, and in a really good way. thank you thank you thank you

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You're welcome! Thanks, feels good to be appreciated!

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Lyrian Space Frequencies

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I like your style. It's really original with a high aesthetic value. Please continue writing. I've gone to the park and talked to trees before. It's good to simply acknowledge them as living beings. If that makes me crazy I don't care, I think it's good for the soul. Sometimes it can be therapeutic and helps me feel better if I'm stressed out.


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trees are so godly and intelligent, I can't believe how horribly we have treated them! all you have to do is look up and see them moving with each other and being affectionate. and don't even get me started on their root systems.....

anyway thank u for the nice comment, it is much appreciated :~)

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Nicola Micanti

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I think this is really good, both for the subject and the style. The animistic view of Nature as sacred and the dicotomy between that environment and the cruel, insensitive and shabby attitude of the man. Great.


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thank you Nicola! 💛

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Nic Rattlehead

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I hope to read more of these they're really good.


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ahhh thanks, we'll see if I can keep it up

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DΛVΣ⚗️

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There is this spot I go to where it feels like theres nothing else just there. I call it my nirvana


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the special spots where you don't have to be perceived by humans are the best

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It's my meditation spot, plus I almost died there when out there by myself once, but ig the universe had different plans for me then.

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