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I've always had this belief that there is more than one consciousness inside a human. Aren't your lungs alive? Heart? Blood cells? They all have a purpose to continue. All of these organs support you to live, and you need to help them as well. Giving up leads to ultimate death for both you and them. Don't be selfish.
I don't really have much to say at the moment, my mind is completely blank lol, but I'm not writing, I just want to get an idea straight. The point is to take care of yourself, you're not the only being in your body. Even if they don't live up to the 7 characteristics of what makes a creature alive, they're almost like a lesser version of life, sure it's not that big, but it's still alive. It can live, and it can die. So, take care of yourself. Not just for you, but for your little companions :)
By the way, PLEASE give me advice on how to become a better writer, most of the things I write have very simplistic ideals and words. If you know any sites, common mistakes that occur with writing, then please tell me, I appreciate it (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
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Storm333
Hey I kinda like the idea that you're trying to explain. In my own way I think of the body having more than one conscious because of how contradicting we are on a daily basis. So in a way I think one part of the conscious is actually thinking rationally while the other is doing whatever it wants and feeding into the desires of the flesh. To every good thing there is an polar opposite with strength just strong enough to challenge it. It's like the cartoons with the little angel and devil on the shoulders except those are simply your conscious rather than different beings (I hope this is making some sense lol). Also I know you probably hear this a lot but if you want to get better at writing just read a lot. Preferably books by authors you would like to imitate. Also try writing more often. Something I like to do is write at the end of each day to test different styles of writing out and to keep my brain sharp.
Hope this helped or was interesting to read💜
thank you for the tips! I really liked your comment, and I do think that without a polar opposite, there wouldn't be a balance so that might be a part of it
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Storm333
Hey I kinda like the idea that you're trying to explain. In my own way I think of the body having more than one conscious because of how contradicting we are on a daily basis. So in a way I think one part of the conscious is actually thinking rationally while the other is doing whatever it wants and feeding into the desires of the flesh. To every good thing there is an polar opposite with strength just strong enough to challenge it. It's like the cartoons with the little angel and devil on the shoulders except those are simply your conscious rather than different beings (I hope this is making some sense lol). Also I know you probably hear this a lot but if you want to get better at writing just read a lot. Preferably books by authors you would like to imitate. Also try writing more often. Something I like to do is write at the end of each day to test different styles of writing out and to keep my brain sharp.
Hope this helped or was interesting to read💜
Ocluar Swell
I like what ur way of thinking X33
I sometimes think people around me are not human and theyre robots instead.
that happened to me a lot when I was younger :) but then I started to realize that what people show you on the surface isn't truly who they completely are, just like how you also have hidden secrets from everyone else, so do they
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