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O, My Star (Constructive criticism appreciated :])
Category: Writing and Poetry
(This is my first poem in a whilee, so go easy on me, haha ^^;) O, my star How scattered you were I wanted to put you back together But you said "no" Then why did you ask for my name? O, my star How you built yourself up from nothingness You weren't afraid to say "no" to others Yet you were so soft to me Why was that? I might never understand now O, my star, How you » Continue Reading