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Poetry in need of constructive criticism
Category: Writing and Poetry
I'm not a poet; I need to write poems for classes a lot so I'm trying to practice and didn't know where else to post this. Please give me your thoughts on my writing and what I could improve. A) I feel shame for wallowing in pain A) The damage is permanent like a stain B) The harm should be enough reason to stop B) But I keep letting this happen till I drop A) I continue doing this in vain A) I fe... » Continue Reading