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some songs i've made

i got an fl license from a relative as a (very VERY late) graduation gift. i've been playing around with it a bit & i accidentally made some songs that i've made recently.

and so i'm just plugging my soundcloud, i went into detail to tell the backstory and give you some thoughts about my work.
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vaper's trail

this was the first song i made & uploaded to soundcloud. In all honesty, this was just an experiment in slicing, composition, and other stuff; dipping my toes in the water per se.

i'm not really a fan of the absolute whack job i did at slicing the vocals, even though this is my first time. however i love being so hard on myself all the time (PAUSE) like a loser!!!

https://external-media.spacehey.net/media/sEYyWMkLAfnez7J01Xttz4n02Ut5Np-skkGLA1zkXx9g=/https://i1.sndcdn.com/artworks-XeZydTg6p3gu8gGe-TK205Q-t500x500.jpg-------------------------

dire night

this is the second song i made for halloween. when i started this song it was completely different and not halloween related so i have no idea how the hell that happened!

i think this one, in my opinion, is extremely repetitive, because i hardly made any variety in the chords and it just sounds like a massive loop over and over and over again. i don't know, maybe that's what it's like having ghosts sloshing around in your head? is this a mission failed successfully???

https://external-media.spacehey.net/media/sSWb0BtbSdnjVsDMHKLg-l4VT0cUlOdMYng6DoXSBE_s=/https://i1.sndcdn.com/artworks-M4j0t2Q6BQSREzzI-J7XvtQ-t500x500.jpg-------------------------

val tries hotboxing 

this is my latest creation, and also the one i'm the happiest with. i did a way better job at composition. in fact, its the only song that my diffident disposition will allow me to enjoy. i might even remake this at one point, who knows.

however, i think this song suffers from the same "repetitive" characteristic from dire night. but, i will admit... i remedied that somewhat with the variety of synths & percussion. in other words, i think its the sort of "great" that could just be a whole lot better.

https://external-media.spacehey.net/media/sIQI1Xn3NjpRH_VgkzfdANV9-6gxeZTmUFOrs3L56Ta0=/https://i1.sndcdn.com/artworks-17uzwQz0SAz7iWhX-f12BCg-t500x500.jpg-------------------------

let me know what you think about these, all criticism is welcome!
i'm probably in the mood to make music until next year because of college & trying to get a job, but only time will tell.


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