abnormal cold (tw:gore)

my body is coming apart at the seams

my hair is dissolving, running with streams

my muscles get thin, my ribs slipping through

the fat of my breasts, my face colored blue


i feel it get colder, what's left of my lungs

the warm air escapes, my body becomes

a carcass, half eaten by ice and by birds


"is this how it ends?"ย 

"i ran out of words"


9 Kudos

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Alexander

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this got kind of meta by the end, sorrywasn't sure how to end it


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Ryougi Fangirl

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such raw poetry, i love it


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Nonya โ˜…

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ohh my woww! its really good i love it! def make more!


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thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeeahhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! i'll make more, that's for sure(โ€พโ—กโ—)

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Ceibot

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Beautifully haunting.
Nicely written, I applaud you, Barbara!


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thanks dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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