rate this story that I just made

in 1804 there was this mad scientists name la deesse johnson who was 47 year old at the time he was trying to make the most powerful potion in history he spend it five years trying to make the potion and at last he did. he die in the 2000s  due to drugs, his family became rich and famous and the more powerful they got the more things they figure out about their there great Grandpa and how he was a mafia and wanted to take over the world and kill everybody,but the kids thought he was good his wife aimra'a used to tell so many good stories about him to their grandchildren but it was a  lie an evil people in demons came into there life and try it to take them all to hell