UPDATE: im almost done with the essay. Wut yall think

Somewhere in Colorado, it’s a late summers evening. A boy named Sam was planting flowers and a tree. He always loved nature, planting bee keeping, and writing. His dad always wanted his son to be apart of his mechanic company.  Sam always wanted to be a write, explore the world. His dad wanted Sam to carry out the family company.

Sam walked into the house quietly, he wasn’t supposed to be out this late. He ran to his room and closed the door, he thought he was in the clear until, “ OPEN THE DOOR!” his dad said loudly. 

Sam opened the door slowly,“ WERE YOU OUT AGAIN?! WHY CAN”T YOU STAY AT THE SHOP LIKE YOUR TOLD!” His dad started screaming at him about how he needs to stop going to the garden and work on getting in the community college near by to get his technation degree. “ This is unacceptable, im taking away your phone and bike.” his dad said. “ What?!” Sam said with hurt in his voice, “ You cant do that! I’ve work forever to get this bike,  you can not do this.” Sam said. ‘ You're grounded until you get your act together.” His dad said. Sam slams his door out of anger and screams into his pillow. “ I’m literally 18.” Sam says,  “ Why won’t he just let me do what i want to,” he thought to himself, “ I so tired of it.” He drifted off to sleep.

Second page:

Sam wasn’t allowed to leave the house, he snuck out sometimes while his was out working. He couldn’t do anything. He was alone and tired of his dad handling his life. His dad forced Sam to come back to Colorado. He would have to leave somewhere, somewhere far. He knew what he could do. He could go the Paris. He just needed money, he already had his visa from that time he went to Canada.

He had an idea, he was gonna get 2-3 jobs, get all the money he needed and leave without telling anybody, except for his grandma. He was gonna try his hardest to leave this horrible place. He just had to find a good job.

His first job was at a hardware store and his second job was part-time at walgreens .He worked for months.(5 months to be exact) But on August 5th, 2017, Sam finally made enough money to get a plane ticket and rent a apartment in france. He already all the paperwork about the immigration stuff, of course. He just needed to find right time to sneak out. He had two weeks to until he had to leave . Sam needed to go shopping for clothes, new toiletries, and a new suitcase. ;)