Sharing a original random story of mine ( looking for tips)

Hello I'm a beginner writer and very shy. I like writing original stories (no fanfic and no uses of AI )

 I feeling brave enough today to share a random text I used to write for a friend of mine. 

It doesn't make a lot of sense out of the blue honestly but I would listen to any tips you can give me ^^ (and also any correction because english isn't my first language ._.) 

Here it is :

 Some footsteps could be heard inside an empty room. Resonating. Attached to a chair, you starting to regain consciousness. A sudden projector light turn on upon you blinding your sight. You really can’t move. With panic you check your surroundings: there is nothing. That’s when a thin masculine figure slowly make its appearance. You’re not alone.

As he get closer you becoming speechless. He is tall, have large shoulders and the outfit of a nobleman. By dint of advancing out of the darkness, you can’t help but notice elegant hair with night colour. Their length are slowly caressing his tighs dancing in rhythm with his footsteps. He observes you with his bloody red eyes. He is chuckling. What’s so funny? You heart is beating. Is it fear? Stupefaction? Or the surprising charm of this man? No time to think about it, he is already in front of you.

Hands behind his back, he bend down to your level. His face in front of you. You can smell a soft aroma of coffee. That kind of coffee that would please any amateur. He doesn’t say a thing. With quite a charm he stands holding a katana (his thin fingers are hidden under a pair of gloves). Using its blade, he slowly touching the outline of your face. It’s bloody… Full of fresh blood.

It’s when you shivering the most that he decides to drop his weapon and come back to you. He is close. Too close? Maybe seeing how red you face turned. Is that a dream? A nightmare? Nobody will ever know. The fact that this strange man doesn’t talk, bother you. He only act. Talking of acting, you see that one of his hand is revealed. A gorgeous venous hand. He touches your face with a faint smile then your lips using his. You can’t believe what’s going on to the point of fainting. Everything was too beautiful for be true. You didn’t had the time to understand this weird fantasy. He did what he has to do.