abandoned… «✦»

hiya! so heres another poem from me. i dont know if theres a word for poems that you just come up with off the top of your head or what but i just keep making those types. this one is about my fear of abandonment.

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i am your pet

i love how we play

how you stroke me so softly

well, used to

for you have grown distant

all you do now is provide for me

feed me, bathe me

but i feel no more affection

and now youve caught me

and this bag is suffocating

but not as much as the water

that seeps through it


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Dude this shit you doing with the font is ugly


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and you felt the need to say this because..?

by plexi; ; Report

im helping your shitty poem stand out dont be mad at me be mad at the website for giving you the option to fuck up your poem

by rab; ; Report

well i thought it looked alright. i get that you dont like my poem or what i chose to do with the font but you really didnt have to comment on it.

by plexi; ; Report

sorry. didnt even read your poem to be honest i bet its great. just the color looks like shit. sometimes.

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