a snippit of part of my book

Jess’ body was thrown to the floor as if it had been a piece of paper thrown to a bin, she was left with lungs that stung and ribs that had bruised. Her body ached and her head felt light, she felt herself slipping in unconsciousness but she fought, her eyes grew droopy and her pride had been shattered, but she used every last effort to get up. She spat onto the ground and tasted the overwhelming copper taste. 

With a loud, croaky voice she stared Akuji (Joe) in the eyes, 

“Villains are not born! Villains are made. So why do you fight as if the monster inside you was born into your blood, soul, tears and spirit?

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“I’m glad it’s you that i’m dyin’ in the arms of” she weakly chuckled

“I’m sorry.. Jess I’m sorry…”

No longer a cold monster..

No longer a heartless killer..

Now he knew what he had done would rot him from the inside out of his already death dued body. 

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