I think I made it too spicy

So as my first post I wanted to test how I can share some original music compositions. This piece is called oh formidable and it's a piece that jokes about presence by making everything just fall a bit short. My only issue I think I made it too weird but I'm unsure if I like it or hate it. Most of my pieces are mostly experimental anyway as most of my music listening and inspirations comes from Frums and Xi.