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it is only when...

another poem! i wrote this one based on a trip to paris with my school years ago, and my arch-rival. i hope you like the cover image, too! 


 

It is only when

you finally stop acting so stuck up -

when you race me through a shopping centre in Paris,

our shoes failing to grip on the polished floor -

that I think maybe

I was too hard on you.


It is only when

I make you laugh

as we sit on the curb opposite the market,

passing a too-expensive

bottle of water between us,

that I think maybe

I was just afraid

of you taking her

from me.


It is only when

you grin empty threats and reluctantly pose

after being forced into a princess dress

in a French toy-shop

that I think maybe

I was wrong about you

all along.


But...


It is when,

after returning to school as

almost-friends,

when you turn to your 

actual friends

with an evil smirk that dissolves

into harsh laughter

as I smile at you in the corridor,

that I know for certain:


you are exactly

the person I always thought you were.


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✭rubin✭

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damn made me think of someone unfortunately,, but dude I LOVE your writing style♡


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thank u!! i’m sorry that it made you think of someone tho :/ :c

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zolaar

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this is literally my best friend, crazy how talented she is


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STOPPP I LOVE U SO MUCH!!!!
u will get bored of me eventually

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Percy M

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sux 2 suc (at the subject, not you!)

that's such a poignant emotional experience though. I've been there, it sucks when people are shitty of course, but it stings a lot more when you get to see glimpses of who they could have been in different circumstances


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It sucked when it first happened, but we were so much better suited as rivals. I realised after that the only way a friendship would’ve worked would’ve been if we’d only known each other outside of school if that makes sense? :)

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