i wrote this poem about a tree in the woods behind my house - i've included a picture of it :) it's the first poem i've ever been proud of lol
There is nothing
but the three of us and our tree.
My hands are raw from the rope
that holds the swing from the thickest branch,
my friend gently pushing me every now and then
as we laugh about nothing
and everything
at the same time.
My other friend uses
the pocket knife he got for his birthday
to carve our names into the thick bark,
claiming this place
for the rest of our lives.
T and A and M
against the world.
There is nothing
but the two of us and our tree.
The swing is
dead,
melted into a bubbled up
puddle of plastic on the mulchy ground.
He is inside the tree,
where one trunk becomes two.
He keeps trying to talk to me,
but he knows I’m not going to respond.
I am trying to scrub her initial off with
the pocket knife he got for his birthday.
The tree creaks as if it is protesting
the loss of someone who
cared so little about it.
There is nothing
but me and the tree.
I have not seen him in a few years,
but I know that he’s okay.
I try to reach out,
but I am just not as important to others
as they are to me.
I sit on the largest root and stare
at the sent message,
at the flashing cursor,
at the ACTIVE NOW at the top of the screen.
He reads the message.
He does not respond.
I turn to the carved initials,
the deep gouges from when I destroyed her
completely
And I use my fingers to
rip at the bark.
I do not have
the pocket knife he got for his birthday
and so I tear at the thick skin of the tree
until splinters embed under my nails
and there is blood running down my hands
and I am finally satisfied that I have
erased all of us from existence.
There is nothing
but the tree.
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P34RLKY
THIS IS SO GOOD!!
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br33zzz <3
This is such an terrific way to explore the topic of loss, I feel like I would analyse this poem in class haha. This is so good, great use of personification, I feel connected to the tree I haven't met before. (✿´‿`)
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this reminds me s0 much 0f myselllf its uncanny. r u spying 0n me??? lmao all j0kes aside this is great i llll0ve it s0 much hehehe
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˗ˏˋ LOU !! ´ˎ˗
THE STORY IN THIS IS INCREDIBLE OH MY GOD!!! LOOK AT U GO! UR AMAZING!!
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AAAA TYSM ILY 🫶
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✭rubin✭
THE REPETITION!!!! STORYTELLING!! EMOTIOMS♡
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thank you!!! i'm so glad you liked it!! <<33 ^v^
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ness
i love love the imagery it’s so good! would love to read more poems if ever they spring up
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thank you so much!! i have one that i might post tomorrow if i can get the cover image finished! and after my results i'll post my poetic prose piece!! <33
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zolaar
gcse students are gonna hate you when you show up in their anthologies in a couple of years
a future poet laureate
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don’t i’ve got a whole plan to leave a bunch of fake drama for them to have to research
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