first song lyrics

These are my very first song lyrics and i need honest opinions on how it is so far, please tell me the truth even if you think it'll hurt my feelings 

Pretty thing 

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Pretty thing, with gentle eyes and soft lips, won't you spare me one kiss? 

So that I can remember your sweet touch by the end of this lonely night 

Such a face, kissed by Aphrodite and welcomed with angels embrace into my melancholic life did you bring light. 

With your bright smile and silly humor

Do i wish I'd known sooner , that you are such a wonderful thing 

My pretty thing©

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if u r gonna give me feedback please tell me what 2 switch out dont be mean just because :(