comic concept!!

hiii! im diva!1 I’ve been having this comic idea and I’d like to hear thoughts about it and things to make it even better than it is currently! :3 this comic story concept may contain some dark themes so please be aware, and the current concept is very rusty so bear with me I would really like comments on how I can improve 1!!

the plot is that the world is dying like already in a state where it’s very hard to bring it back to normality, and the government is very very stinky abt it and to try to solve it they send people to space to try to find land that’s habitable but no one ever comes back alive, due to this the public has been outraged by the people there using just dying.. but in someways the government actually does something good for once and creates things to solve climate to reverse the damage, but it only happens every time people are sent to space or so called missions are completed, the government fixes the land mission by mission, but how exactly? what are they doing to them, where are they sending them… people have tried to speak out about it but the government covers it up with the people speaking out about it going missing or appearing again but they are slightly different.. wonder why(that’s it so far, teehehe)

 uhh this is all I have please if there’s any experienced writers please give me some advice on how I can make this better I really want to make this some comic that has a decent story

he’s the main character, Atlas (this isn’t how he looks like,, this is a small drawing of him as a kid, also atlas is not his actual name)

here you can see even more of the characters I’ve created for this, you can see atlas again with his eyepatch and haloooo11! I don’t know what else to kind of write here but again please experienced writers please help me ouooout11!