pasta reacts pt 1 - Jeff the killer

Hi everyone!! :)

So, as I said last time im going to start this new blog idea which is "pasta reacts" - not gonna lie I held myself from calling this "pasta reacta"- blog in which I'm gonna write in the origin of the creepypasta, a summary of the plot and then give it my personal opinion and rate.

but lets jump directly into todays creepypasta

Now this is the image that started to go around in the web on November, 21st 2011, pubblished by Sessuer on Deviantart, even if the story was written by GameFuelTv. 

The origins of the picture is actually an heavily edited jpop idol.

Jeff's story

Jeffrey Alan Woods just moved in a new city with his family and his brother, Liu.

Having just changed city AND school they are unaware of Randy and his friends, a group of bullies who goes to ask money to children at the bus stop claiming it as "their fee". After Liu said they weren't gonna pay any fee, Randy proceeds to steal his wallet ant this makes Jeff literally go nuts, beating Randy and his mates' asses.

When police finds about the happening they go knock at Woods' door and Liu takes all the blame, ending up being taken to the juvenile detention center. 

Days prior the happening, the neighboor invited the Woods brothers to her son's birthday.

Even if Jeff had just lost his brother days before the birthday he is forced by his parents to attend the party, so he wears his signature white hoodie with some emo jeans and some emo converses.

At the party, while hes having fun, Jeff gets stopped by Randy and the homies to get their revenge.

A fight starts and they beat Jeff with a vodka bottle after he kills Randy. Jeff decides to hide in the bathroom where the other two bullies lit him on fire.

After he gets hospitalised he loses his mind and decides that he looks beautiful as he is with his burnt skin. Meanwhile Liu got released from jail.

Once they're back at their place, one night, Jeff gets caught by his mother while he is cutting a smile in his cheeks because apparently it "hurted too much to smile" and asked his mom "am i beautiful?"

When the woman runs in her bedroom to wake up her husband, using the excuse she wanted to show him how beautiful their son has gotten, but gets followed by Jeff who kills them and then goes in Liu's bedroom because he woke up from all the noise and told him to "go to sleep" before killing him too

My personal opinion

Sorry if the short summary wasnt that short but I tried to syntethize it the best I could.

Now, if I have to give it my personal opinion, it's definitely not one of the best creepypastas i've ever read. It's in a kind of way too unrealistic and in a way also clichè. But it's definitely not the worst one ive ever read (*coff coff* suicide sadie *coff coff*). The writing got some holes here and there but it's overall,,, not bad?? I guess??

Ok now with the rating part, I'm very sorry Jeff fangirls but this one is definitely a 5/10 for plot and a 6/10 for writing.

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Alright folks, this is all for today, remember to leave your opinion on this pasta and let me know if you liked this concept or if i should change anything ;)

also which creepypasta should I do after?

hope y'all have a nice day :) <3

Tobys out.