Poetry... again !!

Some more poetry I wanted to share! This one's a bit older and I thought it was dumb :P but after looking at it again I've grown to like it ー( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ enjoy♡

I do not wear my heart on my sleeve

My chest has ripped open, exposing it

Your warm breathe when you speak

Cuts away like surgery

When you are gone, and my ribs are clean

I will still love all that you are,

For you gifted my me, all that I am

(again criticism is accepted, but please be nice XD)