My story

So I'm making a story about my life. I started it when I was in 8th grade. I want to show it to people but I don't want the people in my life to read it. And also it's a little depressing. It's called “the prettiest of broken glass” . This book is about my life and how it is right now. But I'm planning on making a second book because I'm in my healing stage! But I don't know if I should make it. It's a little confusing.

Does anyone wanna read it? 

OH AND can someone help me with my grammar? I suck at grammar and I'm too stubborn to change it so yk just someone reading it and just changing it without my knowing will help. 

Also I only made this book because I have really bad memory loss? It started when I was a kid but it kind of got worse. And writing it will make me remember my life ig???