Hail the Sun is pretty cool

Yeah. That's it. Oh yeah, The Fall of Troy as well. They have somewhat of a similar sound to them to me. I like Hail the Sun's rhyme schemes tho and alliteration, like, i like analysing different rhythms and rhyme schemes. I really like internal rhyme, but somehow i keep falling into end rhyme, but today i'm trying to break that. Not sure how messed up this poem is gonna be.