Window Poem (draft #2)

When I look outย 

the sliding glassย 

Where the missing panel has broken andย 

Fallen away

I try to not look through yoursย 

The drapes sun bleached unwashed

The precariously perched plywood

It makes me all too curious

Of whatโ€™s hiding away

Of whatโ€™s paranoiaโ€™s play

But I see the evidence of a beaten down older man

Slumped over with a limp living lowย 

on the weekday slow


Flying high in deadhead hazy heights

starting at dusk on Friday nightsย 

In Full flight you feel aliveย 

And a billowing lightย 

Clears the sidewalks of dust and debrisย 

Wash away the rest to reveal the shimmering

As your friends a few doors down

Make plans to hit up the town


But youโ€™d rather stay here

With your drapes and plywood

And washed down sidewalks

To see the dirt and debrisย 

Materialize in waves over the course of the week

And Iโ€™m here to watch it happen

all over againย 


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Extended Blundering

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This is a wonderful piece, tells so much about both the man and the observer!


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Thank you so much for reading it! Iโ€™m really proud of this one

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Of course! I like enjoying other peoples art and writing

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