Before the coffee gets cold - The Lovers

I’ve just finished the first story wishing BTCGC and it was very good. At the beginning I was getting a bit confused with characters because there was a lot going on but as it went on I was understanding it a lot more. One thing i’d say was negative is that almost the entire story was preparing her for the time travelling and only a page or two of her being in the past. I’m sure it’s because it’s the first “chapter” so i’m hoping the other stories will be more time travelling related.


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