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writing: two

you're only a dreamer if you stay up late,
but have early mornings,
coffee and pondering for breakfast,
lunch with a friend in the morning,
a friend for lunch...
early mornings in the afternoon,
sunsets and pen ink for dinner
(oh, and breakfast in the afternoon).
late night lunch with a friend
oh
i forgot to mention
late night lunch with a friend that you had met that you had met friend that you had for lunch...
late early mornings,
pen ink for breakfast,
shutter.
late nights,
shutter.
slow
shutter
speed,
flash!
shutter.
early afternoons in the late morning.
pen ink and coffee for breakfast,
late shutter early night,
early after evenings.
go to sleep.
this is what it means to be a dreamer.

21/10/2021


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I CAN SO SEE WHY THIS IS ONE OF YOUR FAVORITES!! You did a perfect job of spinning the words to bring the element of confusion out, and I found myself re-reading certain parts, thinking "wait, didn't I read this part already?" and that's exactly how it feels to be writing a song (in my example) and looking over the words and reading them over and over and time feels like it kind of stops and it's just...this poem's really good man good job


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