screenplay update!!

screenplay update:

darren had lied to me about the word count so i had to cut down my screenplay to 1789 words instead of the 1980 meaning that I lose the flashforward where they are gay together and kiss at the end which is sad :( but theres nothing i can do about so, i am posting the last section here in memorial for tori and evelyns relationship:

6. INT. TORI AND EVELYN'S FLAT - EVENING

FLASHFORWARD. Tori is sitting crossed legged on the sofa, typing on her laptop with a giner cat curled up beside her, purring occasionally. She has her headphones in and is humming the tune of "Step Back" by GOT. Evelyn bursts through the door.

EVELYN

(groans)
It is finally finished. The last fanmeet of this promotion.

(hangs their coat up, takes off shoes while
talking)

Don't get me wrong, I love my fans and my
members, but GOD are they tiring. It is so much
talking and soooo tiring.

They throw themselves on the sofa and put their hand in Tori's lap, who moves the laptop onto the side table.

TORI

(laughing)

It's okay to be tired of them, but hey,
nothing can top MY fanmeet.

EVELYN

You do know I'm still sorry about what went
down? Right?

TORI
(pressing a soft kiss to the top of her
head)

Yeah yeah, it's all forgiven, although you do need
to make up all the missing time.

They share a kiss as the screen fades to black.

FADE TO BLACK:

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oliii

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that is devastating does darren hate lesbians or something :///

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ROSS MADE ME CUT IT DOWN

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cmon ross wtf ://

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