I found this poem in a random notebook that I've only used once. To write this poem. Thought I would share because clearly this was a heat of the moment writing where I felt I needed to write poetry. It is unclear when this poem was written and I don't even remember writing it. Let's begin.
You are still of the view from time to time.
It becomes facil as I progress through my prime.
You were my dearest treasure of all time.
My beloved,
Absolve my life.
What for?
For feeling tender.
For the finger slipping clutch.
Perhaps it's a superior commodity we are not in touch.
I don't desire reality and actuality.
A vital force to be my crutch.
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Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron
Your poetry always carries with it such power!
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Thank you so much. Apparently I wrote a first and second draft of this one and I literally don't even remember doing so. I honestly wonder when I wrote this
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
I’ll read it in my next video if that’s okay with you?
by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report
Yes that's perfectly okay with me (:
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
Okay! I also plan to begin reading Creepypastas, spooky stories, urban legends, etc. any suggestions on stories and sources?
by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report
There's a creepy pasta I believe that's called the dancer. If you can find it, can you read it? It's been literal years since if read it but it's my favorite
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
https://www.creepypasta.com/the-dancer/
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
Thanks! I did today's on the Russian Sleep Experiment, this can be #2!
by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report
Ooh the Russian sleep experiment was really dark and gursome! Wild if you ask me
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
Yup! And Gateway of the Mind will be #3!
by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report
Never heard of it! I'll have to watch to find out (:
by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report
Yes!
by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report