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I found this poem in a random notebook that I've only used once. To write this poem. Thought I would share because clearly this was a heat of the moment writing where I felt I needed to write poetry. It is unclear when this poem was written and I don't even remember writing it. Let's begin. 


You are still of the view from time to time. 
It becomes facil as I progress through my prime. 
You were my dearest treasure of all time. 

My beloved, 
Absolve my life. 

What for? 

For feeling tender. 

For the finger slipping clutch. 

Perhaps it's a superior commodity we are not in touch. 

I don't desire reality and actuality. 
A vital force to be my crutch. 


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Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron

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Your poetry always carries with it such power!


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Thank you so much. Apparently I wrote a first and second draft of this one and I literally don't even remember doing so. I honestly wonder when I wrote this

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report

I’ll read it in my next video if that’s okay with you?

by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report

Yes that's perfectly okay with me (:

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report

Okay! I also plan to begin reading Creepypastas, spooky stories, urban legends, etc. any suggestions on stories and sources?

by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report

There's a creepy pasta I believe that's called the dancer. If you can find it, can you read it? It's been literal years since if read it but it's my favorite

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report

https://www.creepypasta.com/the-dancer/

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report

Thanks! I did today's on the Russian Sleep Experiment, this can be #2!

by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report

Ooh the Russian sleep experiment was really dark and gursome! Wild if you ask me

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report

Yup! And Gateway of the Mind will be #3!

by Sportsball Supreme Overlord Byron; ; Report

Never heard of it! I'll have to watch to find out (:

by ✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆Indie✧*̣̩⋆̩☽⋆; ; Report