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I have an essay for English class and i wrote a bunch of super professional stuff, but now i have to do the title and its just “Maybe Don’t Murder People?” My dad keeps saying its unprofessional but its sooo fun to just have fun titles for like super well written essays
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Mars
what grade ru in? and what is the conclusion of the essay in 1-2 sentences. maybe i can help.
I’m in 9th grade and its just a theme analysis of the lottery by Shirley Jackson. To sum it up: even if your family has been doing it forever, maybe you shouldn’t murder your grandpa
by LUC1A; ; Report
I feel like in 9th grade a title liike this could get points deducted from your total grade. as well as the title doesn't completely fit the conclusion of the story as well as maybe your essay. the townspeople technically did not murder tessie. it was a traditional sacrifice more so. depending on ur essay i think maybe "lethal silence" or "a plea for change" could be good alternative titles.
but then i did not read your essay. i'm just trying to think of what i'd name such a thing.
by Mars; ; Report
if you do want to continue with this title. i reccomend taking out the maybe and making it into a statement. "don't murder people." "maybe don't murder people?" also indicates there is consequence to the killing. which there is not. except that tessie died ofc.
by Mars; ; Report
thx!! i think im gonna do one variation of "dont murder people" and maybe add the fact that its tradition.
by LUC1A; ; Report
"Murder is bad, even as a tradition."
by Mars; ; Report