When whales were sung along coastlines, as they are again
beaches bled spring water, from dunes to sea
When faraway whales fed a village for a year, distances were
measured in months, as they are again, moving through debris
My friend has cut herself, epaulettes of scars siren a time
where this was her only freedom
Tell the tongue and larynx that words are not actions. Tell
the lungs they are not the heart, tell the hand, the pen
Camouflage quails the nest in grass, a knot of wood shows
likeness to a bird, Frogmouthed to grey, to silver
Serial killers and CEOs measure themselves in thoughts
Imagining them(selves) into other minds they will never be
Freeze is the Bee-eater burrowed in the path of Tiger Snakes
Vivid simplicity of black hole in white sand
Soft loss of every near-death. Experience tells us, the tongue
the larynx should not move against this. Words.
Swift fission, he speaks and I becomes a murmuration of cells
and all that space. The dog’s head, the hand on it.
The scream, the slammed door, sounds that mark abrupt rupture
A snarl of bark shifting chronology
My friend doesn’t speak while needled with ink, the tattooist will
not know she has fainted. Her skin glows damp
This legacy/ then, a village unfed, well worn track through
scrub. A simple sentence; this greening of riparian trees
Revisit me, say the words, come again. Come close where they
can’t see you. Hold a hand long enough, just, long
Whale rises, ocean thick with song, to wave at a tour boat
Her slow eye following the fall of a mobile phone, through fathoms
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William
I couldn't do it! I tried to stay awake and couldn't...... but perhaps it's better to read in the morning. It's like coffee.
I could paste the entire work here and spend hours working each line it's so powerful and beautiful. These lines made me stop and re-read a number of times..."Swift fission, he speaks and I becomes a murmuration of cells
and all that space. The dog’s head, the hand on it.
The scream, the slammed door, sounds that mark abrupt rupture
A snarl of bark shifting chronology" so vivid i feel like I'm standing right there watching. The italic on "i" bouncing around in my head.....
I knew you still did this... I knew it. Such a pleasure to be able to sink into your words....
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Thanks for getting me over here Will.
Your kind words are a balm.
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Steve
Brilliant, lyrical, movement! You always set the Barr to inspire! I trust that you are well Amanda :-)! It is so wonderful to read you again!!
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Hi Steve! Just feeling my way around in the dark here. Not a big fan of nostalgia in general but quite excited about the idea of reconnecting with some folk in this format.. Looking forward to reading your poems! :)
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