I spent hours of my precious time writing, and the result looks horrific. As bland as rice. I'm crying and exhausted. It looks like the artistical abilities are extremely denied when it comes to me. I hate my artwork; it's always irrelevant, and even I perceive how humiliatingly I do it. I wish I was just like Rimbaud at my age.
Why is my prose like this
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Sirius
your profile says you're almost 14. almost no one is writing masterpieces so young. you've already shown a vocabulary greater than most middle/high schoolers in today's age. you're not behind, you're not struggling, you're just still in the process of learning. which is genuinely awesome!! if you want to write masterpieces, i recommend figuring out the exact parts you love about other works, and figure out how to enjoy those same foundations in your own art. and lets not forget the countless master poets, taught today in classrooms globally, who wrote about how much they despised their works as imperfect. it's a good sign you're recognizing faults, it means you're able to know exactly what to work on.
long story short: you have time. you're already doing great, you'll get there.
thank you by the consolation, im way better now. perhaps i just too frustrated, not only by that work in specific, but by the fact that i struggle at publishing my art as well. im thinking about abandoning the work i commented about previously and start a silly fanfic. i normally don't get advised by older people, so—again—i really appreciate your statement. ;)
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