Hey im back with a new exercice ! this time it's quit easier ! it's just writing poems about a theme, and the poem is free verse so you can write it however you want
so im going to show you some that I made. Im not particulary proud, I find them pretty basic and not as deep as I tried to make them but well it's with practice that you get better !!
so here are my poems
travelling
This place is calm
Like a night in a countryside
This place is warm
Like a cuddle with your mom, laying on her side
This place is fresh
Like the beginning of spring, already melancholic of the winter’s morning dew
Perhaps this place is messy
Like a kid forced to an unwanted destiny
Or this place is blessed
Reminder of the faith in our heart that never left
Maybe this place is dirty
Filled with people’s significant negativity
This place could be anything,
As much as it could be nothing
What’s matter is not what it is
But more what you do once you’re here
Change
“I can do it” as I claim putting my hands in the air
“I’m just waiting for the right time” is my favourite excuse
“stop pressuring me” but no one did me such an accuse
“but what if nothing changes after that?” might be my biggest nightmare
I want to change
“I’ll try anyway” is my philosophy
“if I don’t try I’ll never know” is my favourite testimony
“I don’t want to have regrets” my soul isn’t heavy
“I can do it” is my legacy
I changed
hope you liked it ! you can give your ideas and poems if you want i'll read them
chay's out
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allis
I am not really poem person. But the poem changed was really something. I think many people can identify with this poem.
first tysm !! but yes i know what you mean by that, i tried to describe moving on by changing, im glad you can see yourself in it
by Chay; ; Report