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literature exercice #2

Hey im back with a new exercice ! this time it's quit easier ! it's just writing poems about a theme, and the poem is free verse so you can write it however you want

so im going to show you some that I made. Im not particulary proud, I find them pretty basic and not as deep as I tried to make them but well it's with practice that you get better !!

so here are my poems


travelling

This place is calm

Like a night in a countryside

This place is warm

Like a cuddle with your mom, laying on her side

This place is fresh

Like the beginning of spring, already melancholic of the winter’s morning dew

Perhaps this place is messy

Like a kid forced to an unwanted destiny

Or this place is blessed

Reminder of the faith in our heart that never left

Maybe this place is dirty

Filled with people’s significant negativity

This place could be anything,

As much as it could be nothing

What’s matter is not what it is

But more what you do once you’re here



Change

“I can do it” as I claim putting my hands in the air

“I’m just waiting for the right time” is my favourite excuse

“stop pressuring me” but no one did me such an accuse

“but what if nothing changes after that?” might be my biggest nightmare

I want to change

“I’ll try anyway” is my philosophy

“if I don’t try I’ll never know” is my favourite testimony

“I don’t want to have regrets” my soul isn’t heavy

“I can do it” is my legacy

I changed


hope you liked it ! you can give your ideas and poems if you want i'll read them

chay's out 


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I am not really poem person. But the poem changed was really something. I think many people can identify with this poem.


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first tysm !! but yes i know what you mean by that, i tried to describe moving on by changing, im glad you can see yourself in it

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