The body was found just after sunrise, though the early light did nothing to soften the sight. Renault Reeve lay on the pavement as if he had been placed there rather than fallen, his limbs arranged with an eerie tidiness that made the scene feel curated instead of tragic. The neighbors—those few who had ever noticed him in life—watched from their windows with the uneasy air of people witnessing something they were never meant to see, whispering that he had always been quiet, always alone, always drifting through the world like a misplaced shadow.
The police moved around him with the mechanical efficiency of men performing a task whose conclusion they had already settled on. Their voices were low, their expressions bored, and the word suicide passed between them with the casual certainty of a foregone decision. Yet the air around the body felt wrong—too still, too expectant—as if the street itself were holding something back. A faint metallic scent—blood, rust, or something else entirely—hung in the morning air like a warning. The balcony above him looked untouched, the railing clean, the concrete unmarked, and yet the fall seemed too precise, too straight, as though gravity had been instructed rather than obeyed. The few belongings Renault owned—an empty wallet, a frayed coat, a key with no matching lock—were collected and bagged without comment, as if the absence of a life were easier to process than the presence of one. The officers spoke of him in the past tense with the ease of people discussing a stranger whose existence had never mattered: no family, no friends, no contacts, no one to notify, no one to mourn.
The silence that followed felt heavier than the body itself. Neighbors offered only vague impressions—he kept to himself, he walked at odd hours, he spoke rarely, he looked through people rather than at them. Their discomfort grew as they tried to recall details that refused to surface, as though Renault had been deliberately forgettable, a man who lived in the negative space of the world, occupying the edges of rooms and the corners of vision. The more they tried to describe him, the more their words dissolved, until it seemed possible that Renault Reeve had been less a person than the outline of one. When the officers finally lifted the body, the limbs bent with an unnatural looseness that made one of them look away. As the stretcher wheels clicked across the pavement, a shallow indentation remained where Renault’s head had rested—far too deep for a fall from that height, yet undeniably there. It was the kind of detail that should have raised questions but instead slipped quietly into the growing catalogue of things about Renault Reeve that did not quite make sense. When the street returned to its usual stillness, the only trace left behind was a thin smear of dust shaped almost like a silhouette, as if the world itself were reluctant to release the outline of a man it had never fully allowed to exist. The street did not return to normal after Renault Reeve’s body was taken away.
The neighborhood felt hollow, unable to fill the space he left behind. The silence that followed settled into the ground and the houses like a weight. Neighbors retreated indoors but lingered behind their curtains, still watching the spot where his body had been, waiting—though for what, none of them could say. They only knew that his absence felt disturbingly present. The dent in the concrete remained. Too shallow, too strange, and carefully ignored. People walked around it as if something might crawl out should they step too close. The police tape fluttered in the wind. The officers had stopped speaking. Even the passing cars seemed muted, as though the world itself were waiting. Renault Reeve’s apartment door hung slightly ajar. No one remembered opening it. The hallway beyond was dim, the lights flickering with a will of their own.
Inside, the air was stale, thick with the smell of old books and something metallic that clung to the back of the throat. The apartment was sparse: an unmade bed, a single chair, a table. Everything arranged with meticulous care, as though measured into place. The walls were bare. No photographs, no decorations—nothing to suggest a life lived there. Only a single notebook lay open on the table, its pages blank. It was the only thing that felt personal, though the emptiness of the pages felt less like neglect and more like omission, as if something had been removed with intention rather than never written at all. Neighbors who had spoken earlier now avoided the hallway entirely, claiming the lights made them dizzy or the air felt wrong or the silence pressed too tightly against their ears. One elderly woman insisted she heard footsteps pacing inside Renault’s apartment long after it had been sealed, but when asked to describe the sound, she went pale and said only that the steps were “too even,” as if whoever—or whatever—was walking had never learned to vary its rhythm.
The building superintendent, a man not easily unsettled, refused to enter the apartment again after retrieving Renault’s rent records. He said the temperature inside felt unnatural—neither warm nor cold, but something in between, a stagnant neutrality that made his skin crawl. He claimed the shadows in the corners shifted when he wasn’t looking directly at them, though he later laughed it off, his hands trembling as he locked the door. And through it all, the indentation on the pavement remained, untouched by weather or time, marking the place where Renault Reeve had ceased to be—or perhaps where he had finally become visible, if only for a moment. The street felt subtly, irrevocably altered, as though something had been disturbed that should have remained undisturbed. And the absence of Renault Reeve—loner, ghost, outline of a man—was beginning to feel far more present than his existence ever had.
The Death of Renault Reeve (short story, tw su1cid3)
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𝖅𝖊𝖊 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖉𝖊𝖕𝖗𝖊𝖘𝖘𝖊𝖉 𝖛𝖆𝖒𝖕𝖎𝖗𝖊
This is beautifully written. I look forward to more of your writings in the future
Thank you <3 <3 i do write poetry more often, and I posted some so if you wanna take a look uu can ^^
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You're very welcome, and I most certainly will
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Kamurin
Stop writing about me.
Great story
You’re alive, and it’s wonderful. Thanks for the compliment though!
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