do you guys like my poem i wrote it

I need to be the dew that conceptualizes on your form

To truly breathe your wonder 

I need

Like rain underwater

The revelling at the spread of sunlight across the virgin sky 

Sculpting itself, sweetly

Loving itself 

Attaining itself

Where before the night clouds proceeded, fondly yet tired

Somnolently and sorrowfully 

The strain has been released

Crying its freedom to the open heavens

And the amniotic sunrise bathes these clouds in the joy of life

The joy to live 

And the unpermeated worlds within the core of my soul

Vibrate every cell, molecule, atom of their metaphysical being

With the most pure, jocund frequency to grace their divine form

All in harmonic unison 

Singing their glory to this sacred moist earth

And to the wills from whom it was born