The Sun Is Shy

The Sun Is Shy

The Sun likes me
But he's heard me say unpleasant words about him
So he comes out when I'm not around
And when I look for him, all I see is clouds

He's harming me but he gives me life
So I can't help but also feel attached

Even if yesterday I couldn't stand his blazing rays
Today I'm searching for his warm embrace

And I don't care if he's distant
Because if I wait for him
Like he waits for me
We'll be together in an instance

The Sun loves me
And I love him back

We'll be together until the end of time


got inspired when the moment I stepped outside to sit in the sun, the sun hid behind the clouds. so why not literally romanticize the situation?


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𝓢𝓮𝓫𝓪𝓼𝓽𝓲𝓪𝓷

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This is lovely. :]
I love the theme of transcendent love and the use of allegory.


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I'm glad you liked it!! I love allegories so it was fun playing around with words

by neraida☆; ; Report

I've followed your blog, so please post more of your creative writing. ^^

by 𝓢𝓮𝓫𝓪𝓼𝓽𝓲𝓪𝓷; ; Report

If I ever get inspiration again I'll definitely post something!! I also subbed to your blog <3

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This is so cute <3


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tyyy <3

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Very cute!!!


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soyelmismisimo

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i really like it. i think it's lovely!


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tysmmm (✿◡‿◡)

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˚˖‧♪⟡₊❀Abi⋆˚꩜。𝄞₊⊹

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this is actually really good, I like it <3


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ty queen <3

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