I hate the school system.

In my school they have joined a new program where every grade has to follow they same exact format and write prompts and then people put no real effort into it because everything we learn off of the program is made for every grade making it easy and boring and even the advanced classes not even being able to have more creativity in the essays and whatnots. Even most of my teachers agree that they think the program is dumb because no one every learns anything and it strips all the creativity out of everything writing and or even learning in a English class your supposed to be pushed to your limits so you can succeed better idk but it's really stupid. And the teacher have to grade by this format and AI also grades out later on this format so even if you are creative with your writing you'll get a failing grade. How are people going to learn if they love writing if their not being pushed to actually work and be creative, the program gives them a 11 sentence essay. Its absolutely ridiculous, I used to have to write a 1200 word paper in 5th grade I'm in 8th grade advance so I'm supposed to be doing highschool work. 

This is the 11 sentence essay format my school uses

1) title, by (author) is a thought provoking [genre]

2) summary - "it centers around ___"

3) thesis 


4) reasoning #1

5) reciting evidence #1

6) explanation - "I think this because..."


7) reasoning #2

8) reciting evidence #2

9) explaination


10) restate thesis

11) mic drop - universal Truth 


Its simple and I just don't feel like it it helps me grow in writing, I mean I get why some might like it, it's easy to do and it's for the people who don't care about trying. Is it wrong that I want more out of school? I remember only ever learning a little bit about the ways to hook a reader to keep them interested into your story. I was excited to learn the this but ever since this school system joined this program this school went to a B+ school average to a f grade school. I want to go far in life but I feel like Im missing out on writing.


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