My first story :D

Girl gone missing.

A girl from a strict norman family was sick of her living conditions, sick of the judgement,  sick of her pain she had inside. She decided to run away, and on that day she had chosen, she packed her things, ran as fast as she could, didn't say goodbye, didn't leave note, nothing. 

She had ran, and ran, and ran, until she hit the highway, she stick her thumb out, and kept walking. Cars had passed her, they honked, they sped past, they slowly drove past, but none stopped for her, until a white falling apart struck came along, there was a crack in the windshield, no handle on one of the doors, and it was quite dirty. 

The truck stopped for her, and the man inside told her to get in, so she did, she told him her name, where she was from, and why she was leaving. He told her he would take her somewhere where she wouldn't have to see her family anymore, she agreed, she had a slight feeling in her stomach that this could be wrong, but it was probably nothing.

He offered her food and drink, he took pretty good care of her, and she trusted him... except for that guy feeling, but again she thought, it was probably nothing.

They keep driving, she guesses they're probably a couple hours away from where she had been picked up, then they missed the turn.

She suddenly got this terrible feeling of what was yet to come, then suddenly,  the doors lock, they start driving faster,  he turned the music up, driving recklessly,  they almost drive off the bridge, he's yelling he's gonna kill her, she tries to escape but the gun he pulls out is just to terrifying for her to try to leave, she wants to go back, she wants to pet her dog one last time, she wanted to say goodbye to her sister, she realized she was never mad at anyone, except herself, she realized it was her who hurt her, not anyone else, until this happened,  she blames herself,  she wants to just get out of this car that dosen't seem to be slowing down, she wants to jump off the bridge,  she wants to die, but not like this. She felt so stupid for letting this man take her and let him try to kill her, she blamed herself.

She wanted to drown and never come up, but instead she was still in that truck...



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Not bad for the first time, to be honest, I didn't understand at first whether she died in the end or not


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Thank you, I really do appreciate it. I purposely did that, to let it kind of remain a mystery.

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