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Words in advance by pablo
Dedicated to:
Dedicated to all those whose hands chose to stand in the way of the intense, and highly overexposed, resurgence of the wild winds of adolescence. To those who deduce the inaccurate incomprehension of those around them and of any soul where everything supposedly seems better.
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The Colossus written by pablo
The Corrupt One, procreator of opulence—
Delusions of grandeur or of resistances.
That cause the abstinent from progression to wither,
Until reaching the mere hint of congregation.
The Corrupt One, summoned by persuasion.
By the commanding instinct— of premature growth.
Of great valence and of open doors,
By engendering the genesis of flashes and follies.
What is extracted from the root will never grow again.
Be it by detonators of causes or by perseverances.
The enigmatic contrast of being cushioned by grand design,
And watching the consolidation —anatomically— grow,
Of Body and of soul. The ample and self-sufficient covering.
And yes, it is true. There is a thirst for rebellions:
Of intrinsic flows and of underlying aromas.
That is why they say the twisted never gains firmness.
That is why they reclaim distance; being owners of what is their own.
Of that which was never invaded by those false rectitudes.
To decapitate oneself before the world would not be a transformation.
Nor an eponymous allusion by spitting blood from the throat.
Behold the prodigy, the lasting forgiveness of footprints.
The detector that being colossal is not an imposed crime but the provenance of the natural.
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ANGELINO
omggg I haven't seen ur poems in a whileee I missed them a lot, your writing becomes everytime more beautiful than the last time 👌
Thank you buddy!! Yes I think that I had a progress in my writing
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woodlouse .𖥔 ݁ ˖✶⋆.˚
"To decapitate oneself before the world would not be a transformation. Nor an eponymous allusion by spitting blood from the throat." akjhdgakgsdhkagskdhakjhgd !!!! OH ANOTHER PABLO BANGER HAS HIT SPACEHEY.COM!!!!!
Don't make me blush hehe
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pocono
im too dumb to understand poems but even i know this is fire. nice job pablo
It's okay dude, To be honest, I also find poems difficult to understand. But I'm glad you liked it
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twinkannihilator46
i clapped i cheered standing ovation beautiful pablo i will be rereading it later trust this is great
dont worry, take your time :-)
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I reread it with asher and we did so great! we had to check about 5 times how to read specific words, and I kept lying to asher about some of them cuz my dysorthography. it was beautoful! asher loves it
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Oh no, it can't be. I feel bad for making you go to so much trouble with the poem
But did you manage to understand anything? Or do you still have doubts about something? I'm so sorry, mars.
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NO IT'S OKAY I UNDERSTAND IT!!! DON'T APOLOGIZE IT'S BEAUTIFUL, WE CHECKED MEANINGS ALSO JUST IN CASE WE DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO SAY SOME WORDS. it's beautiful pablo please release a hand written papaer copy soon and send it to my location with thy signature. you're doing great I love your poetry, it's marvellous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CHUCKLED
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