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So uhhhh i wrote a song for my boyfriend, as a part of his Christmas gift. I am horrible at writing and i know this is cringe but i just wanna know if its good enough to send💔
“The smile i love is so close,
Yet so far away.
So are the hands that i crave in my skin,
That make me feel safe.
Your eyes dont deserve such sight like me,
But i wont complain if thats what you want,
If thats what you need.
You are the thing i look most forward to,
Not the day, not the night,
Just to feel you in my arms.
And after all these foolish words i wanted to say,
I love you, any time and any day.”
Advice is well appreciated
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Safestdanger 🗡
Aww, this is so sweet! And so what if it's "cringe"? It's how you really feel about him. It's earnest. I think it's great that you're making something like this to show him how much he means to you. You could always write more, or add more detail 'cause that feeling of love is boundless while it's there. Yet you don't have to. I think you captured what you were trying to, and that's enough. Maybe sit on it for awhile, maybe you'll think of s'more things to add, and maybe you won't. Regardless of how you regard its quality, it'll mean something to him because it came from you