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some of my old (mostly concrete) poetry

i'll just put it all in one spot for now. some of this older stuff is... not my favourite. some is still fairly decent to me. but i suppose i'll put it all here anyway because it's better than keeping it in my icloud notes for eternity



2024-08-17 - "crumb"


the, what else to (god), by two; to go (go to got) by (drab undrab, drab) go to go by god (first to drab) monthly. monthly (one two one, by) by to go then. then they go to them by god. god to form (them) scribble. (pots) at the corner, by them. to go (form) by them they go to god. seventy-three (unrandom) go (mill: milling to mill) by god they go. to my god they go by them. milling by the form of the monthly god.



2024-08-17 - "Web"


BN [ENDING] TBACBN [END] BN [ENDING] BN [ENDING] good ENDING [X] on it ON THE END (??!?!! your) YOUR {goodbye} GOOD ending ("bye :3" 00) am I CLEAR?! come clean LAST CLEAN COME CLEAN (leave) IMMEDIATE immediate immediate LEAVE (leave) goodbye (it's ending) THE end {good night} (eight eight) near [GOOD NIGHT]



2025-03-27: "black" (note: i made this whilst listening to the pearl jam song black)


&&(clay...-to@EVER_
YTHING"what was.,.?
{~}________________
'by;?,!WhY...?/!___
#;..7______________
m-_________________



2025-04-06: "camera cannot capture certain things"


they can't capture the beauty of looking out my window at the trees and bushes and the lights and the lone visible sign for brandywine as they get pelted by the rain an hour past midnight. i'd say it's more washing, cleansing, maybe paradoxically mixing and intermingling than pelting or anything of that sort.
they can't capture the feeling of earth touching itself, kneading and churning itself into something different from ever before yet so familiar. one thing i like is the way the chemicals are released by the plants and everything else and come together into a complex, nurturing smell, almost like milk in its nature, called petrichor: the scent of rain.



2025-04-22: "away"


bang-!~?////////
----///oceanaeco
///again-::-@"v?
cefacefacefAcefa
//j,,\*NO;#;;!!/
m6675453-2210987
--gone,b//-_~---


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peregrine

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absolutely love it !!! i was writing my first blogs like this cos it feels like u draw a picture and sing a song simultaneously!!


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yayyy :3 and i didn't think about it that way but it makes sense, i like it

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