So I wrote a poem, my first poem actually. I wrote it for our school magazine, didn't really wanted to but my teacher kinda pushed us into submitting one, and I had to write it in a few hours so it really sucks. I don't think ts would ever be selected lololol
I do think i did ok for my first poem i ever wrote tho idk
WHAT SHOULD ONE EVER BE ?
They tell us to
hold it in
don't be so emotional
for it makes one weak
They tell us to
chase our dreams
But are our dreams
so acceptable
When an AI does it
for free?
Walking silently with
our overloaded bags
our overflowing thoughts
will they ever
make us free?
Don't be so quiet
Don't be so loud
What should one
ever be?
I'm trying to fit in
They tell me
it isn't enough
For I'm all of it
from meek to weak
What are we even
ought to do
When I am me
and you are you?
Maybe when we grow up
and meet
We'll finally know
That we were not weak
Now I'm sitting by
the edge
Pouring my thoughts
onto a sheet
But what's the point
when an AI
would write it
for free?
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Wichi DeNo
Finding a person that shares one’s mind is unexpected indeed,
but i loved your poem very much,
and hope you’ll be heard by mankind.
THANK YOU SO MUCH
I didn't think someone would actually read it
I really appreciate it thank you!! :D
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