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we have grown so fast, so slow.
we have paved our way to death,
for the next generations to grow.
and i have already used my last breath.
our journey has ended before it began,
but our end is an escape from this torture.
we have died before the rising of the moon,
to make our trip to death much shorter.
we raced the years into the ground,
until our shadows stretched too long.
we wore out our welcome in a moment,
leaving nothing but cracked pavement for the next song.
days pass, clouds disappear, but nights revive.
so will we be the people of the day or the night?
we have endured the troubles but quit being alive,
so who knows if we will continue being alright?
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dani
Your poems are absolutely perfect !!! („★◡★„) I don’t want to seem like a copycat, but would it be okay if I started sharing my own poems too ?? ( •̯́ ₃ •̯̀) maybe you could give me some feedback or help me improve ! ദ്ദി(• ˃ ᵕ ˂ •) (totally okay if not !)
whatt noo that would be lovely and i would be more than happy to support you, and it's not like i'm the only one writing poems on this app lol, follow your dreams
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aaaahh thank you so muchh !! ♡♡♡
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Omg this is so beautiful
thank you so much <3
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