My nails keep breaking up
I don't do anything
but when I look down into my hands
they are broken.
They cut my clothes,
they cut paper,
they cut people,
they cut my skin.
My nails keep breaking up
I bite to smooth them
but they get more edge
and now they saw
I think someone is breaking my nails
but I cannot forgive myself from letting them do it
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andrew
The way you write i like it,just a reminder. You dont have to blame for yourself for someones
Sometimes, when the other person doesn't take the blame, one must to, that is not a good way of thinking but I can't help to think that way
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soupferret
I like this quite a lot1!! ദ്ദി(„• ֊ •„)
It's straight to the point, and conveys your meaning well. I hope to read more of your writing soon1!!
I feel flattered since I don't have much confidence in my writing, thanks!
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AbsentMind
this i like.
paints a mental image while getting ur point across.
keep doin you
I like your funny words, thanks for the encouragement!
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Mushi
Just a little rant, for anyone wondering... actually... I won't say anything.
Would this be considered a poem? for me, is just a funny looking one.
nailed it.
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btw lain goat so i'm stealing ur profile lalalala
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Go ahead!
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