Nails

My nails keep breaking up

I don't do anything 

but when I look down into my hands

they are broken.


They cut my clothes,

they cut paper,

they cut people,

they cut my skin.


My nails keep breaking up

I bite to smooth them

but they get more edge

and now they saw


I think someone is breaking my nails

but I cannot forgive myself from letting them do it


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andrew

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The way you write i like it,just a reminder. You dont have to blame for yourself for someones


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Sometimes, when the other person doesn't take the blame, one must to, that is not a good way of thinking but I can't help to think that way

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soupferret

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I like this quite a lot1!! ദ്ദി(„• ֊ •„)
It's straight to the point, and conveys your meaning well. I hope to read more of your writing soon1!!


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I feel flattered since I don't have much confidence in my writing, thanks!

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AbsentMind

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this i like.

paints a mental image while getting ur point across.

keep doin you


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I like your funny words, thanks for the encouragement!

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Mushi

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Just a little rant, for anyone wondering... actually... I won't say anything.
Would this be considered a poem? for me, is just a funny looking one.


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nailed it.

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btw lain goat so i'm stealing ur profile lalalala

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Go ahead!

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