HEY BABESSS

Im here today to share some things I've written, I'm curious what people think and I'll love criticism and advice for the next times i write, please be upfront and forward with it :D

"I fear loving you.

I fear ruining your gentle pure and kind love.

You are everything to me, the air I breathe.

Everything, the ground beneath my feet.

You're the reason I still cherish things, the reason I still see.

The reason I still spread my wings, you're in the future which I foresee.

I wish to hold you close to me, you're why i love so carefree.

I want to keep you near myself, but all i do is inconvenience my health."