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Hii, I'm testing out some poetry and writing for my first blog, let me know if you like it <3 (Or don't like it, that's fine toooo)
january.
It comes by so fast.ย
December just ended, maybe my life did too.
I wouldn't know. It's not New Year's Day, just yet.
January.
It's back again.
But this time, I'm alive.
Take it as you will, rip up the paper, burn it.
Get rid of it,
All I did was win the race.
January.
On January 12th, I was brought into this world.
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asKAITLINch
I think itโs great! Not too sure what the message is but I do know it at the same time. Weird feeling haha :)))
Thank you!! I kind of came up with it on the fly but the point is supposed to be that the narrator wasn't born until the very last sentence. He/she didn't know if they were dead or alive, because they didn't exist yet. It wasn't 'New Year's Day' just yet. :)
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ohhh that's so creative <333
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Thank you~~!
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