I THINK IM BOUT TO STEAL /ref

So idk if any of my moots know abt this series on youtube called Terrible Mouse? Well I watched it and yeah its pretty ass so far. I could make a whole separate post abt my issues with it (Using the torture of children for shock value, the weirdly suggestive scenes involving said children, just bad story and plot holes, bad SA rep, etc), but I was kinda thinking abt taking Lorna, the main antagonist, and making her my own! I might also do a little rewrite of the story.

Honestly I think the plot had potential, and maybe still does, but the way the creator is doing things is not it. There is also so many plot holes its atrocious. Like why are these furries attacking these children instead of the people that hurt them it just doesn't make sense.

Also because I have to talk abt it why does it sexualize Lorna so much? Like it would be one thing if she just wore certain clothing, but why is she straddling these canonical children? Real creepy and not in the horror way its in the gross way.

Anyways, I might fix her to my liking later if anybody would like to see or something :P

Thx for reading this ranttt bye


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I haven't ever heard of this series. Does what it presents provide a deeper commentary and get you to sympathise for these people? Or is it only for the shock value and the pure grotesqueness of what is presented to the audience?


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Hmm its all on youtube, but I would say its purely for shock content, which is one of my problems with it. Like in the first episode there is a ~10 minute scene where the main antagonist tortures these children that did absolutely nothing to her just because she hates humanity. I feel like its trying to capture that 2000s newgrounds aesthetic where its just shocking for the sake of shocking, but I feel like that doesn't excuse bad writing when they are trying to set up a story lol.

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