WRITING ?!

HELLO ,, 

Recently I've been narrowing down timelines and stories for characters of mine which have resulted in a more finalized beginning of a story, currently only at five pages but actively working on it, and I wanted to know if anyone here enjoyed reading or would be curious to give it a read, let me know if anything can be improved! 

Again; only the start but its about this young Finnish girl who mysteriously gets injured and has to be flown to Canada for treatment, which starts the unraveling to her life and traumas. Kinda hard to explain,, 

let me know!! :]